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M. Majeris's avatar

Love the original slang.

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This is high-stakes world-building. The contrast between the polished cruelty of Marsander and the raw, predatory grime of Abis is chilling. You’ve captured that classic cyberpunk "no-win" feeling perfectly—Iver is escaping a corporate monster only to jump into the arms of a literal trafficker just to find the truth. The detail about the "amber nova" was a visceral way to describe the burner attack, too. Nice one.

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